Sunday, 23 February 2014

Locations for filming the thriller opening

Location
Primary location
unused train tracks for the girl to run on. (At the end of Holly’s garden)
-Setting: Dark lighting, at night-time to film it- connotes something bad and encourages the whole scene to feel more ominous and dangerous. Whole of this scene is in the same lighting.





Secondary location: (flashback- black and white) in a pub, (molly’s grandma’s pub). 
-Setting: Light lighting, flickering light above to foreshadow that something bad may   happen. Colorful lights will make it seem happy but the flickering light suggests otherwise



Back to Primary Location: 
Back to original scene reinforces that before was a flashback and we see contact between the killer and the girl
-Setting: Dark lighting again, with strong flashing lights throughout the scene e.g., the car lights, the man’s torch light


Final Scene:


This is in an unused barn at the same location of the train tracks at a member of our group's house. 
-Setting: Chiaroscuro lighting

 

Costume designs for thriller opening


FEMALE CHARACTER
The idea we had for the girl’s clothing was to make her look sophisticated and classy, to make her look like the classic damsel in distress. We chose black clothing as it is simple and gives the sophisticated look.  Her hair is up in a tidy bun again to create her sleek look, representing her respectable character.


In the bar

·         Nice, classy, black dress.
·         High heeled boots
·         Neat and tidy hair, up in a bun.
·         Pink lipstick.
·         Clutch bag.
·         Big, black, fur coat.


Running down the tracks
·         Same dress.
·         Heels in hand.
·         Same big fur coat.
·         No clutch bag.

Makeup
     Her makeup in the bar is very neat and natural with bright pink lipstick and dark eyes, this changes as she is running down the tracks. When she is on the tracks her makeup has smudged to make her look more distressed, she will also have blood on her forehead after she falls over.























MALE CHARACTER

The male character will be dressed in a baggy dark jumper, with baggy dark work pants. We have dressed him to look shabby to create an opposite style than the girl. 

Dressing him shabby makes him look very unappealing and helps build up his antagonist character. His black clothes are used to portray his dark, evil character.
     In the bar
    In the bar, the male character will be wearing a baggy dark t-shirt with his baggy work pants.

    On the railway tracks
On the tracks in addition to his clothes he will be wearing a baggy dark jumper with its hood up in order to shadow his face.





Saturday, 15 February 2014

Script

      
Scene one - train tracks

Molly
Diegetic sound:
*heavy breathing*
Breathing continues to become heavier as she runs down the track and slowly fades quieter as she runs away from camera

Diegetic sound:
*gasp*
As she turns around and sees someone in the distance she gasps with fear.

Diegetic sound:
*falling against the floor*
The sound created as she hits the floor


Cuts to flashback - the bar

Diegetic sound:
Molly 
so are we going for some food then’

Friend
‘yes that would be great’
...
*phone rings*
oh! Just one moment’
*friend gets up and walks out*

Hustle and bustle of bar and ‘sweet caroline’ playing in the background

After the bar scene.

Cuts to man walking into the barn

Diegetic sound:

*chopping sound of the axe as is hits her neck*

Non-diegetic sound:


sinister background music

Synopsis of our thriller opening


When a girl gets spiked on a night out with friends, her evening takes a dramatic toll when she finds herself running for her life on an abandoned railway track. Trying to make sense of the events that have happened. A fall may prove fatal in an attempt to escape from a deranged ex-boyfriend who cannot seem to get to grips that their relationship has ended. When local authorities are alerted of the girl’s disappearance, a frantic search party set out to find her in hoping that they aren’t too late.

Friday, 14 February 2014

Shot List For Thriller Opening 'Sweet Caroline'


  1. First shot is a high angled shot from behind a girl of her running. She’s holding her heels in her hand and her dress seems scruffy and ripped
  2. Cut to a close-up of her face (mascara running down etc.), looking left and right with heavy panting to show she’s scared 
  3. We cut to her legs running from the side as there’s a tracking shot 
  4. Cut back to the behind of her, this time a panning shot for a few seconds but she will be getting further away
  5. Close-up shot of the girls face gasping and looking left
  6.  Here there’s a long shot (she’s still looking left) but she stops completely
  7. She drops her shoes and we cut to a close up tracking shot of them falling to the floor (slow motion)
  8.  Point of view shot of the girl (as she’s just looked sideways)
  9. The point of view shows the green bushes and they’re rustling – diegetic sounds of her crying and gasping heavier and heavier
  10.  Zoom into the bushes as it rustles more and more
  11. Extreme close-up of her eyes as they shut
  12.  Cut to flashback of what she saw before
  13.  Black and white scene
  14.  Long shot of two people sat at the bar
  15. Close-up on girls face, this time she has no make-up running down it etc.
  16.  Tracking shot of girl drinking
  17. Extreme close up on drink as she puts it back on the counter
  18. Cut back to longshot
  19.  Over the shoulder shot of the guy standing up
  20.  *Start montage of Jump cuts* Close up of guy ‘accidentally’ knocking the girls bag off the counter
  21. *Closeup of the bag on the floor as the contents spill
  22. *Cut to close-up of the guys hand taking something out his pocket
  23. *Jump cuts of his hand going to put it in the drink of the girl
  24. *Close up of the drink with the pill fizzing in it
  25. *Close-up of girl drinking the drink
  26. Cut back to the prior scene – non-diegetic uncomfortable/disturbing music
  27. Dissolve edit to the barn door opening
  28. Cut to medium closeup of feet as he's walking through the door, towards the camera
  29. Cut to close up of the axe swinging
  30. Jump cut to medium close up of feet walking away from camera
  31. Cut medium, tracking shot of him walking through the gate and over to the girl lay down
  32. Medium shot of the axe in the air
  33. Cut to medium shot of the shadow of the axe above his head and quickly moving down to hit the female character.
  34. Fade to black to suggest the end of our piece.
-FIN-

Obsession: Student Thriller Analysis


Obsession Student thriller from Holly Entwistle on Vimeo. 

The production starts off with a full screen image of the ‘Miramax studios’ logo. The logo is presented as a full screen title telling us that it is important information, and the colors of the logo are white writing on a black background. This has been chosen because the black and white contrast with each other as binary opposites and create a sinister atmosphere. Next the ‘fractional studios logo appears, this again is full screen on a black background and the image and writing are in white. The crow is all black with a red eye, black symbolizes darkness along with red symbolizing fear and death, the use of the red in the crow’s eye makes the crow look more sinister and dangerous all of which sets the mood for the upcoming thriller, fear. Crows are a bird associated with mystery and power, many people see them as a symbol of superstition and bad luck, therefore the crow has been used as it helps to create the thriller genre of dark and evil and also adds to the sinister effect. We then have the title of the opening of the thriller, ‘Obsession’. This is full screen so we focus on it. The writing is white and Sans Serif and the background is black. This shows us the binary oppositions and foreshadows the genre of the piece; thriller. There’s no sound, and the silence is significant until a non-diegetic, industrial rock type of music plays with a repetitive, machine like rhythm. This is played while the titles are still on. This creates a sinister atmosphere.

As the titles fade out, the music becomes louder and louder and hits a crescendo. From this we have a sound bridge of the music (hitting the crescendo), and takes us to the emphasized diegetic sound of a tap dripping. The music dies out and we hear the diegetic sound of the water hitting the basin of the sink. This has been done to build tension from the audience and to emphasize the sinister atmosphere the scene is intending to create. The shot is an extreme close-up and we see the water dripping one-by-one. Whilst the music is still playing there is an emphasized sound of water dripping from the tap.

Sound bridges are constantly used to link each of the shots within the opening scene. We cut away to a long shot of a hill from inside the house looking out of the window, followed by a series of ellipsis edits showing other point of view shots looking out of other windows is the house. In the corner of one of the shots is a pair of binoculars, these are placed in order to imply that the character is spying or stalking someone. The camera is slightly wobbling on these shots adding to the effect of the point of view. Here there’s natural light used and it’s bright. This creates controversy with the fact that it’s a thriller and the setting seems positive. On this shot we have white, overlay titles. These are in sans-serif, which tells us the film does not require intelligence to understand the plot; it implies that the film will be action filled and modern. The titles grow as we cut away to a medium close-up of the window. Here it’s still ambiguous but we feel due to the mysteriousness of the opening that we have seen villain.

From here we cut to a montage of cuts; the titles disappear and we cut away to a bed shot, here it’s at a low angle. There’s high key low contrast lighting involved to represent more a feeling through the camera work. We cut away to a high angle shot of a mobile phone; it’s an extreme close-up to show the significance of the phone. The phone also shows the modern era juxtaposing with the exterior of a rural area. The phone turns on; here we hear a diegetic sound of the phone vibrating once again to reinforce the significance. Only a hand appears and this could show, once again, the importance of the phone. We once again get overlay titles, in the same font, as we fade into another close-up of the t-shirt. From this we cut to a low angle of a coat, the low angle could suggest dominance alongside with the dark lighting. From this we cut to a close-up of the zip of a blue jacket someone is wearing. We hear the diegetic sound of the jacket zipping up; this creates ambiguity because we still don’t know who the person is as we’re yet to see his face. To reinforce the idea of mystery we cut to the back of the character who is putting his hood up. This allows the audience to believe he is trying to hide himself and makes it more of an ominous opening.

We cut to a close-up of his shoes on a red carpet. The red carpet could give the idea that something is going to go wrong due to its negative connotations of blood and death. The black shoes also signify unhappy things; on top of this we have more overlay titles. From the fairly static pictures so far, there’s a match on action edit of him walking out of his bedroom door. We have a close-up of the door; we hear a diegetic sound of the man walking on the ground and the door opening. We then cut back to the previous shot on the floor to represent the match on action.

From here, we’re once again looking at the back of the character to continue the mystery as he walks down the stairs. We cut to a low angle long shot of the stairs, with the camera cutting off his face. The titles are still ongoing from here as the ellipsis edits of his morning routine continue, we hear the diegetic sound of his cereal crackling as he pours the milk.

We feel a sense of normality with this character currently as he’s partaking in everyday activities so it’s something we can relate to. But alternatively, his character is never fully revealed which consequently allows us to think something is wrong, something bad is going to happen and he may be the villain. This idea is supported by the non-diegetic music in the background at this point, the same industrial rock music that played at the beginning.

Once the person has left the house we fade to black. From here we cut to him walking, he does have a bag which allows us to think he’s going somewhere. Maybe he is going to school, or on the other hand he may have alternative motives which we, the audience, aren’t aware of. 

A graphic match is used to follow the boy as he walks, this is done from a front angle long shot, this is used to continually shoot his walk and move time on so it does not get boring for the audience. An ellipsis edit is then used to introduce a young female character, who we presume is the victim. We presume she is the victim because she is a young female character, using Propp’s theory about character roles in films she fits the character of the ‘princess’ or damsel in distress. The constant sinister background noise merges into a happier melody accompanied with diegetic bird noises in the background to create juxtaposition. This has been done to portray to the audience a little about the girls character, the bird noises are to represent her innocence and happiness compared to the contrapuntal non-diegetic music represents the danger she is unaware of. We can see that she will be the protagonist character in the film and soon become the victim. The music is used to create happiness around this character in order to create a love for her so when the girl later becomes the victim the audience feels empathy. A cut away shot is used to show both characters walking along the same path, not together but with the boy following behind the girl. As the girl comes into contact with another boy we hear the diegetic sound of their interaction and greetings. Meanwhile in the background when another person appears we see the boy, who we presume is the protagonist, disappear behind a tree, this is done to show the audience he does not want to be seen. This is done to create tension from the audience as we know something bad is soon going to happen however the girl does not. Doing this gets the audience involved with the film and entices them to watch more.

Throughout this the music is still playing in the background. Overlay titles are being shown over the scene in white writing, overlays are used to as they are an important piece on information within the star of the film, however they are used as overlay as it makes the beginning of the film flow as we focus on the action.

The girl drops her bag as she is walking; this makes the audience question why she dropped her bag? Did something make her drop her bag? A high-angled shot is used which creates a sense of weakness and vulnerability about the girl. As the girl bends down a medium close up is used and we see the boy stood behind her however when she stands again she looks around and they boy is no longer there. We see she looks concerned, we can tell she senses a presence of some sort.
he is no longer there showing the audience that he is stalking her and makes us wonder where he is which then builds tension and creates an air of mystery.

The screen now fades to black and the music tempo and pitch decreases and once more the sinister sound that was used at the beginning of the film. An ellipsis edit is used to take us to a street, at first the lights are blurred used to create a sense of unknown and mystery amongst the audience, this then focuses showing a long shot of the street. 

It then cuts to a long shot of the victim (the girl) walking down the street alone, her face is dark as chiaroscuro lighting is used. This makes the viewer’s uneasy and on edge as they do not know what is going to happen next however they know the girl is in danger. Another cut to medium to long shot of someone else walking behind her who is unidentified, the character has a bigger body build and their hood up so we presume this is the boy from earlier. At first we just see one figure however as she continues to walk the second figure emerges from behind her, this creates a shock to the viewer and build the tension as we realize that the incident. The diegetic sound of cars is used in the background as this links with the scene and makes it realistic, simultaneously the non-diegetic music is building in the background towards a crescendo, and this mirrors the action of the film as we know the disaster is drawing near. A medium shot of the attacker’s legs standing in front of the victim just before an extreme close up of the girls mouth is showed as we hear the diegetic sound of the girl screaming in a loud, unpleasant pitch. A dissolve edit is used to transition the shots, the use of the dissolve here helps build the tension as it is quite a slow edit, is also makes the characters seem closer than they have ever been.The shot of the boys legs is used in order to show a barrier between the audience and the girl, is makes her seem more helpless and provokes emotion from the audience of a will to help her. We are not shown what makes her scream as is creates more interest and a want to know what is happening, it leaves us on a cliff hanger in order to be hooked for the rest of the film. We assume that the boy who features in the start of the film has attacked her in some way; we are just not sure as to whether she survives the attack or is the attacker gets found. What will the resolution be?

A cracking sound of faded voices end the scene whilst the film title is shown again, flickering each letter on and off. This leaves the opening of the sinister tone needed to continue this effect throughout the rest of the film.

I think the opening as a whole was very well done and creates the sinister tense mood that thrillers need. The end scenes help to build the tension for the viewer because of the lighting and non-music used. All of the editing done is smooth and does not create confusion or a jump in the flow of the opening so the viewer is clear about what is happening. An area that could be improved is the middle section of the opening, when it is shot in daylight outside. I think the process is a little drawn out and could have been done more efficiently and less confusing to keep up the flow of the film.